A beast once live in a horrible place or should I say the forest, but that was
before he became a beast. It happened in Christmas.
He had a gift, but it was too simple he yelled and scream and whined about it.
After all that, he finally stopped. He slept and her family was not happy about it,
even Santa. So Santa had a plan that could make him learn his lesson.
before he became a beast. It happened in Christmas.
He had a gift, but it was too simple he yelled and scream and whined about it.
After all that, he finally stopped. He slept and her family was not happy about it,
even Santa. So Santa had a plan that could make him learn his lesson.
While he was sleeping he didn’t know he kept on growing. His teeth grew,
and his eyes and ears got bigger. His skin colour turned green.
and his eyes and ears got bigger. His skin colour turned green.
The next day he found himself in the forest. He got lost then finally he got
back to his village but every one was scared of him and think he's a stink
bomb. He didn’t knew he turned into a beast. He found out when he saw
himself looking hideous by looking at a mirror and by the fish smell of his
breath. It’s been 12 years, his family has thought he died, but he was still
alive. Every Christmas he gets 3 coals or even a 100 coals. Then he finally
thought his lesson he yelled out I'm sorry but not in English in a scary way.
Everything was back to normal.
back to his village but every one was scared of him and think he's a stink
bomb. He didn’t knew he turned into a beast. He found out when he saw
himself looking hideous by looking at a mirror and by the fish smell of his
breath. It’s been 12 years, his family has thought he died, but he was still
alive. Every Christmas he gets 3 coals or even a 100 coals. Then he finally
thought his lesson he yelled out I'm sorry but not in English in a scary way.
Everything was back to normal.
Hope you like how I describe a beast. Also please give me some feedback.
Hello again Venice,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your description about this Fantastic Beast. I think it is such a creative idea to involve Christmas day in your story and I think your story has a hidden message in it as well. The message that I interpreted (understood) from reading this story is that you should always be grateful for what you have, even it may be something small. In other words, we can say 'never take anything for granted'. This means not to expect something to always be there with us, so we need to be thankful for everything we have.
Thank you for sharing this story on your blog. I'm sure everyone would have something to take away from this story, just like the beast learned his lesson! Do you have a name for your beast?
Wishing you a happy Christmas and I'll talk to you soon Venice!
Take care :)
Susie