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Showing posts with label task 6. Show all posts

Sunday, 5 December 2021

Continue of The Bus 🚌 Story

 Hello everyone.

For wananga we had to do a writing prompt. One of the choices was a free choice which you can write your own story with your own topic. I chose to finish one of writing prompts I made near term 3.

Here is a link to the first part. Link

Here is the continue:

“Meet me tomorrow at the last stop? What does that mean?” I asked myself. I turned the piece of paper hoping to find more clues but only ended up having my hopes up for nothing. I snuck the piece of paper into my pockets. While reaching for my pockets I felt a string of some sort touch my fingertips. I pulled it out of my pockets and to my surprise it was a hair tie. I decided to tie my soft brunette hair, pushing it back to allow me to see my surroundings better.

I went back inside the bus sliding my fingers across the seats looking for another clue. As I turn my head left to right I start to see words engraved on the metal walls. I moved towards it trying to take a better look at what it said.

“Hello, can anyone see this?” It wrote.

“Yes.” it answered. 

“What’s your favorite colour? Mine is green.” they wrote.

“I like green too but I prefer the colour brown, a light brown actually.” they answered by writing. Suddenly reading all these words I remember some of my memories that I lost before I had a coma. 

I could recall the exact emotions I felt while reading the engraved writings on the wall. I was at a seat next to a window and below the window, writing from my pen-pal was engraved on it. I would always sit on that seat hoping my pen-pal had already replied to all my writings. 

It was a seat found behind the 5 front rows of seats, barely in the middle of the bus. After a long day of school and barely surviving I found peace talking to this person. We met in person once or twice and shared contact numbers with each other so we actually trust each other. 

After zoning out I find myself smiling as I touch the engraved words on the walls. I stopped and brushed off the feeling and memories I felt. I started to look around at the front window of the bus trying to focus on my initial goal. 

I notice dents and light scratches on the hood of the bus. It’s surprising that they never thought to renovate the bus. I went outside to take a closer look at the hood of the bus. I saw traces of paint leaking underneath the bumper. I crouched down to see what it was. Words were written on it, though it was upside down from my view.“˙ ǝɹǝɥ ǝɹǝʍ ɹǝɥʇǝ∀ puɐ ǝǝlʎW”. 

I laid down on the green thick grass to take a closer look. It said “ Mylee and Aether were here”. I thought for a second…….and then I realized, My name was also Mylee?! Though I wondered to myself “Who is Aether?” Another mystery was yet to be solved….. 


Thank you for reading this blog post.


Friday, 10 September 2021

The Bus 🚌 Narrative Story

 Hello everyone.

Today I am currently finishing an activity that i started during lockdown. It was a wananga activity to do when you bored and honestly I was bored. I haven't written much as I just started on another story I decided to restart the whole thing because it wasn't something interesting enough for me to finish. The activity was to write a short story about a picture. 

My story is about a bus because that's what the picture was. It's a time traveling bus but I haven't written that down yet. 

Here is my work:



I saw a bright light flickering in the air. I heard a whisper in my ear “I shall give you

my power to know the truth. Find the mysteries of the bus.” 

I wondered to myself, “ What am I supposed to do with a bus?”


I suddenly woke up inside an abandoned bus. The air smelled very green so I guessed I was

near plants. I placed my hand on the moist floor and stood up as I felt the soft moss

growing out of the bus. I started to walk out of the bus, trying to figure out where I was.


I heard the angelic voice whisper in my ear again “I’ll give you a clue, try to remember what

happened a year ago.” I didn’t know why it told me to remember something a year ago

because I was in a coma that year and I don't remember anything before that, so

that was a problem. I went around the bus to search for clues. 


I somehow found a folded up piece of paper. The paper flickered with glowing sparks of

lights as I started to open it. To my surprise, words were written on the piece of paper.

“Meet me tomorrow at the last stop…..”


To be continued………..


Thank for reading this blog post.

I hope you have an amazing week. 

What would you have down if you were in the same situation as the person in my story?