Continue of The Bus 🚌 Story

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For wananga we had to do a writing prompt. One of the choices was a free choice which you can write your own story with your own topic. I chose to finish one of writing prompts I made near term 3.

Here is a link to the first part. Link

Here is the continue:

“Meet me tomorrow at the last stop? What does that mean?” I asked myself. I turned the piece of paper hoping to find more clues but only ended up having my hopes up for nothing. I snuck the piece of paper into my pockets. While reaching for my pockets I felt a string of some sort touch my fingertips. I pulled it out of my pockets and to my surprise it was a hair tie. I decided to tie my soft brunette hair, pushing it back to allow me to see my surroundings better.

I went back inside the bus sliding my fingers across the seats looking for another clue. As I turn my head left to right I start to see words engraved on the metal walls. I moved towards it trying to take a better look at what it said.

“Hello, can anyone see this?” It wrote.

“Yes.” it answered. 

“What’s your favorite colour? Mine is green.” they wrote.

“I like green too but I prefer the colour brown, a light brown actually.” they answered by writing. Suddenly reading all these words I remember some of my memories that I lost before I had a coma. 

I could recall the exact emotions I felt while reading the engraved writings on the wall. I was at a seat next to a window and below the window, writing from my pen-pal was engraved on it. I would always sit on that seat hoping my pen-pal had already replied to all my writings. 

It was a seat found behind the 5 front rows of seats, barely in the middle of the bus. After a long day of school and barely surviving I found peace talking to this person. We met in person once or twice and shared contact numbers with each other so we actually trust each other. 

After zoning out I find myself smiling as I touch the engraved words on the walls. I stopped and brushed off the feeling and memories I felt. I started to look around at the front window of the bus trying to focus on my initial goal. 

I notice dents and light scratches on the hood of the bus. It’s surprising that they never thought to renovate the bus. I went outside to take a closer look at the hood of the bus. I saw traces of paint leaking underneath the bumper. I crouched down to see what it was. Words were written on it, though it was upside down from my view.“˙ ǝɹǝɥ ǝɹǝʍ ɹǝɥʇǝ∀ puɐ ǝǝlʎW”. 

I laid down on the green thick grass to take a closer look. It said “ Mylee and Aether were here”. I thought for a second…….and then I realized, My name was also Mylee?! Though I wondered to myself “Who is Aether?” Another mystery was yet to be solved….. 

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The Bus 🚌 Narrative Story

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Today I am currently finishing an activity that i started during lockdown. It was a wananga activity to do when you bored and honestly I was bored. I haven't written much as I just started on another story I decided to restart the whole thing because it wasn't something interesting enough for me to finish. The activity was to write a short story about a picture. 

My story is about a bus because that's what the picture was. It's a time traveling bus but I haven't written that down yet. 

Here is my work:

I saw a bright light flickering in the air. I heard a whisper in my ear “I shall give you

my power to know the truth. Find the mysteries of the bus.” 

I wondered to myself, “ What am I supposed to do with a bus?”

I suddenly woke up inside an abandoned bus. The air smelled very green so I guessed I was

near plants. I placed my hand on the moist floor and stood up as I felt the soft moss

growing out of the bus. I started to walk out of the bus, trying to figure out where I was.

I heard the angelic voice whisper in my ear again “I’ll give you a clue, try to remember what

happened a year ago.” I didn’t know why it told me to remember something a year ago

because I was in a coma that year and I don't remember anything before that, so

that was a problem. I went around the bus to search for clues. 

I somehow found a folded up piece of paper. The paper flickered with glowing sparks of

lights as I started to open it. To my surprise, words were written on the piece of paper.

“Meet me tomorrow at the last stop…..”

To be continued………..

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I hope you have an amazing week. 

What would you have down if you were in the same situation as the person in my story?

My descriptive writing

Hola everyone. This week we have been working on descriptive writing. We were given a picture to describe in present tense. 

The picture is about a girl having her birthday. We weren't allowed to give them names but if I could I would name the birthday girl 'Felicia'. 

Here is my descriptive writing:

Click! The tube of the lighter lit up a small yellow fire fluttering left and right. The smell of the

gray fire smoke ruffled into my nose making me take a big sneeze. A bright yellowy orange

fire lit up the shiny colorful candles stuck through a fluffy, soft sponge cake covered with

chocolate frosting. 

Millions of sprinkles slowly drizzle off the exquisite chocolate cake. On top of the cake, kit kat,

mars bars and m&ms were scattered near the dripping candles. The lonely green gummy bear

sit in the middle of the cake

A fine lady occurs in front of the cake and makes a shiny smile exquisite as sunshine.

She flicks her gorgeous, smooth, blondy brown hair as she looks at her cake feeling delighted. 

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This week 100 word count

Hello Everybody this blog post is about my 100 word count. If you don't know what 100 word count means, it means your story must be a 100 words. Each week you are given a sentence, a picture or 5 words. This week we are given 5 words to fit in our story. It could be in any order but the word must be in your story. My story is about a game. I live in an apple farm but a banana tree shows up.

Here is my 100 word count story:
It was a new day in my video game. It was called Apple farm. I walked around every Apple tree to pick the bright red ones but then a tree appeared. It looked like a banana tree but what was it doing in an apple farm. I took out my very heavy black ladder. As I climbed up to get the bananas I realised that my ladder was not tall enough to reach it. So I jumped up but then I slipped off the ladder and fell. It took damage through my character so I had to restart the game.

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100 word count

Hello everybody, This blog post is about my week 5  100 word count. The 100 word count challenge was a picture our story had to flow with the picture. My 100 word count is about me delivering a package.

Here is my 100 word count story:
 It was normal of me delivering a small package, I arrived at my destination. I slowly stepped on the stairs. The stairs were the colour of blood, it made me worry. My finger came closer to the doorbell. Slowly and carefully my fingers touched the doorbell. I removed my fingers from the dirty old doorbell. I waited and then I heard the doorbell ring after I pressed it. A letter came out from under the door, it said look inside the package.  I opened the lid and my eyes blew off, it was hand that had been cut off.

Here is the picture:


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What do you think about my story?

100 word count Week 6

Hello everyone, This week we have a new 100 word count activity. For this week we had to have this sentence in our story ( "No," he said." I like marmite") I thought about what kind of food it was. I never tasted marmite before so i came up with a story about marmite. I made marmite come alive in my story.

Here is my story hope you enjoy.
Once upon a breakfast, Peanut Butter and Bread were playing at the table. There were other lunches there too. Peanut butter noticed Marmite being alone. Nobody wanted to play with Marmite. Peanut butter didn’t do anything, he just went back to Bread and with his other friends. They played truth or dare, it was Peanut Butter’s turn. “Who do you have a crush on?” said bread. Everybody Mumbled. Of course everyone knew he liked Jelly. “Hahahah, that’s easy it's Jelly!” Said pancake. “No,” he said. “I like Marmite….” Everybody gasped. It seems like Marmite heard everything they were talking about.

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Have a wonderful day. "Bye."

100 Word Count Story

Hello everyone, today's blog post is about this week's 100 word count story. 100 word count story is about having 100 words. Our Teacher gave us half a sentence and try to fit it in the 100 word count story. For this week we had to have the word "the orange one spoke first" in our story. I imagined orange as a Halloween decoration.

My 100 word count story is about Halloween, an orange decoration from Halloween is usually pumpkins.

Here is my story.

I was hopping up and down, every house in the neighbourhood gave me candies.  “One last house to go!” I happily yelled. I hopped all the way to the last house. The house was full of mysterious decorations. It was full of spooky stuff, inside and outside. I walked towards the door and softly knocked. “Trick or treat!” I said. The only answer I got was mumbling. It sounded like the pumpkin on the ground. There were five colours. Blue, purple, pink, yellow and orange. They suddenly turned around, The orange one spoke first, “Sorry we ran out of candy.”

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100 word count Writing 👍

Hello readers, Today i'm going to show you my 100 word count for week 9. Its suppose to have this word in it  "then everything stopped". I made the story kind of scary.

Here it is:

I was walking with my friend. We were happy because we got the new book. We didn’t notice it was nighttime. We got to the park and got separated. I suddenly saw someone coming from the dark. It approached me and yelled “YOU’RE DEAD!” First I thought it was just my friend but then when he got closer, I knew it was no joke. I ran as fast as I could trying to think he wouldn't catch up to me. I tripped and moved backwards trying to move away from the killer. Then everything stopped and I collapsed.

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Writing an Expsition About Sports

Hello everyone It's me again. Our class did an exposition about sports being less competitive. Firstly I wanted it to be the same as it is but then after a few reasons from everyone I decided to make an exposition abut sports being less competitive. Some people might disagree with me but hear my reasons first.

Here is my writing about sports being less competitive.

Less Competitive

I think sports should be less competitive so it’s more fun.
My other reason is so that the team won’t argue if the other team scored a goal.
The other reason is not bragging about who won or lost.

Fun is so important  while playing sports. If you don’t have fun you won’t be that
convinced to play. When you lose you feel ashamed but if it's for fun, it's an equal
score for both teams, nobody wins nobody loses. 

My second reason is about arguing if the other team scored. Your team will
always argue with the goalie or  with your teammates about not doing their
hardest. The team would think less of themselves.

Lastly is teams bragging when they won.  When you win a game you
would be cheering and hugging and telling everyone that they did well.
Some people are always bragging about how they win, sometimes they would
sing a great song about them winning.

Those are the reasons why I would want sports to be less competitive.
I am still sticking with my reasons, they were about having fun,
no arguing and no bragging. I think it would be great if sports were less competitive.

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Do you think sports should be less competitive or should we keep it the same?

100 Word Count For This Week 👍

Good day everyone, this is a blog post about my 100 word count. We actually have been doing 100 word counts for a long time, I just didn't want to make a blog post about it but here I am making one. So 100 word count writing is about a story with completely 100 words. Our teacher gives us a category each week about how the story would be told.

For this week it's about this picture. It looks like a statue.

 

Here is my writing about it: 

There were two young men staring at the early sunrise of winter. They were standing at two
flat rocks and they were wearing ancient coats. The brothers thought they were cool with the
coats. Suddenly during the beautiful sunrise, a green light was flashing at them. Since they
were the only ones awake, they got turned into hard stones because of the green light. They
were frozen for eternity. Centuries after that incident their families have been taking care of
them, cleaning and polishing them. They now call them, the two brother statues. They now
stay at a valuable place.

I use this tool to make sure it's 100 words. I know it looks short but I'm sure it's 100 word.

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Poem About Myself

Hello everyone. Since we had been working on our poem writing, I made my own poem. I used a Limerick, Acrostic and a Quatrain. I also made a positive poem.  The poems were just for fun.

I don't have much information but here is a photo about my poem.

Here is my very long positive poem.

We all need to be kind

You have to be very strong

Never be left behind

It’s okay if you're wrong

You should think about how great you are

Cause I think you can play the guitar

You should be kind

What’s in your mind

Inside your a terrific gold star

You should be strong

You should be tough

Now sing along

Sure that’s enough

Now you can all stand up

Don’t be a that sad pup

I don’t care what they say

I enjoy this good day

I hope you like the poems I wrote.
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New Poem Writing

Hello Readers, We made two poems, they are quite interesting.  This two poems are called Limericks and Tanka. Limericks is about the rhyme not the syllables.

Tanka has five lines. It goes 5, 7, 5, 7 and 7. Those numbers represent how many syllables each line needs to be. About Tanka we had to write about spring, a pet, and a family member.  I don't have a pet  though.

On limericks it also have five lines. It wasn't about the syllables. It was about the rhyme. It goes long long short short long. The line that is suppose to be long needs to have the same rhyme. The one that is suppose to be short the end of their sentences needed to rhyme.

Here is a picture of my two poems:

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Poem Writing

Hello Readers, I am going to talk about poem writing. Recently in our writing we have been doing some poem writing. We started with an acrostic poem with our name. Then we did a Cinquain about sports. We learnt things about poem too. There are different types of poem.

Here is a picture of both my Poems:

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Have a nice day
What is Sport do you like??

Recount Writing

WALT Write a recount

This week we are writing a recount about our weekends or
holidays. A recount is about what you  have done before. The
very hardest part of our recount was that you have  to think
about what you have done in the weekends or holidays. Miss
Scott said we needed to have an interesting start every
paragraph so the reader will not be very bored when they read
your recount. Please give me a feedback or an advice at my
recount.  

Riding a bike

Practicing my bike wasn't easy as I thought. I just fall and fall over again So I’ll just
try. My sister Is looking at me fall and start again and more falling and started again.  
All of this is happening because I always start on the grass so I started on the concrete.
Well what do you know I did it, I did I couple of loops around our car, many times.
The thing is don’t let go of your hope.

Watching my brother play

My brother got excited when he can play Ps4. my brother won at this game called
fortnite with his friend. Well I didn't get excited about that, because he will be very
entertaining and loud when he wins. While brother was playing I was bored that’s
why I always sleep.

Played PS4

I was holding the  best controller of PS4. Me and my sister was playing brawlhalla.
We got lost 2 times and win 1time. We we’re playing teams that’s why we can win.
Like always our brother wants to play something more interesting. We played Paladins
instead. It wasn't easy for me, but i just give it a shot. Well I lost I didn't saw the one
that actually killed me in the game. He/she was actually at the back .

Clean bed

I had the worst bedroom ever. I cleaned out my dirty clothes  from the floor, and to
the  basket and started to fix my clean clothes. My clean clothes is also messy so i
started to fold it properly. The Pillows and my teddy’s was on the floor so I put them
where they were supposed to be.  My sister helped me folding my blanket  and We
finished cleaning up.

Played tab

I holded the awesome tab in my hand. Me and my sister was playing an app called
Minecraft. We can change the skin character and plan our world. We did a lot of
building and I maked A secret hiding place. We didn't had a chance to do the roof
because it was always raining in the app so I have to change the weather over and
over again, so I decided to have a rest and slept (I didn't sleep at the app).

Summary

My recount is great  because I tried riding  biking without complaining anything.
The minecraft are good to play with if it wasn't raining. My best part about my
recount is riding my bike. Thank you for reading my recount writing.