Hello Everybody this blog post is about my 100 word count. If you don't know what 100 word count means, it means your story must be a 100 words. Each week you are given a sentence, a picture or 5 words. This week we are given 5 words to fit in our story. It could be in any order but the word must be in your story. My story is about a game. I live in an apple farm but a banana tree shows up.
Here is my 100 word count story:
It was a new day in my video game. It was called Apple farm. I walked around every Apple tree to pick the bright red ones but then a tree appeared. It looked like a banana tree but what was it doing in an apple farm. I took out my very heavy black ladder. As I climbed up to get the bananas I realised that my ladder was not tall enough to reach it. So I jumped up but then I slipped off the ladder and fell. It took damage through my character so I had to restart the game.
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Friday, 20 March 2020
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Hello Venice. I enjoyed reading your story.I used to live on a farm that had lots of apple trees.If we couldn't reach them we used to go and get the horse and sit on her to reach the ones up high.Do you find it easier to write a story using sentences given to you or do you prefer to write about a picture?
ReplyDeleteHello Mrs Cassidy, Thank you for commenting. Yes, I do prefer to be given a sentence rather than a picture. Have you fallen off trying to reach apples by sitting on a horse? It is interesting that you use a horse to reach the apples that were higher then the others. Thanks again for commenting on my blog post. Have a wonderful day.
DeleteHello Venice.I have never fallen off a horse while picking apples but I have fallen off a horse while riding.I hope you have a great holiday and I look forward to more of your blog posts.
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