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Showing posts with label picture. Show all posts
Showing posts with label picture. Show all posts

Friday, 10 September 2021

The Bus 🚌 Narrative Story

 Hello everyone.

Today I am currently finishing an activity that i started during lockdown. It was a wananga activity to do when you bored and honestly I was bored. I haven't written much as I just started on another story I decided to restart the whole thing because it wasn't something interesting enough for me to finish. The activity was to write a short story about a picture. 

My story is about a bus because that's what the picture was. It's a time traveling bus but I haven't written that down yet. 

Here is my work:



I saw a bright light flickering in the air. I heard a whisper in my ear “I shall give you

my power to know the truth. Find the mysteries of the bus.” 

I wondered to myself, “ What am I supposed to do with a bus?”


I suddenly woke up inside an abandoned bus. The air smelled very green so I guessed I was

near plants. I placed my hand on the moist floor and stood up as I felt the soft moss

growing out of the bus. I started to walk out of the bus, trying to figure out where I was.


I heard the angelic voice whisper in my ear again “I’ll give you a clue, try to remember what

happened a year ago.” I didn’t know why it told me to remember something a year ago

because I was in a coma that year and I don't remember anything before that, so

that was a problem. I went around the bus to search for clues. 


I somehow found a folded up piece of paper. The paper flickered with glowing sparks of

lights as I started to open it. To my surprise, words were written on the piece of paper.

“Meet me tomorrow at the last stop…..”


To be continued………..


Thank for reading this blog post.

I hope you have an amazing week. 

What would you have down if you were in the same situation as the person in my story?



Friday, 6 November 2020

100 word count 'A Dizzy Bee'

Kumusta everyone this week's 100 word count is about a picture. If you don't what '100 word count' means, then I will be able to explain it to you. Basically our teacher gives us a topic to write about and try to have a story with 100 words. The topic we relate our story about can be a picture, five words or a sentence.

My story is about a studio making a stop motion but a dizzy bee comes inside their studio. What do you think will happen next?

Here is my 100 word count writing:








Week 4

“Ready for stage 2!” yelled the director. A group of people came together and tried to shoot

a stop motion film.

Some were really, really tired and had sore eyes from the flashing camera.

Though something unexpected happened. A flying, dizzy bee started wandering

around their studio. Everyone panicked until it laid down on their studio table and

they noticed it didn’t have sting. They were all sad knowing that the bee wouldn’t

make it. They ended up making the stop motion film with the bee. It ended up as a documentary

and what adventures of a bee could’ve had.


Thank you for reading this blog post.

I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Always welcome to blog. If you ever find a dizzy what will you do?

Friday, 28 August 2020

100 word count 😁

 Hello everyone, this week's 100 word count is about a picture. If you don't know what a 100 word count means, it means a story that has 100 words. Our teacher either gives us a picture, 5 words or a short sentence to relate in our writing. This week it's a picture of a polar bear stuck in the middle of the ocean.

Here is the picture and the story:

I woke up finding my little cub wasn’t beside me. I asked everyone but I didn’t find him. Until a bear told me he had gone over the barriers. So I went searching for him. Though I was tired to move any longer. I then woke up in the middle of the ocean. Though a dark shadow walked towards me in the mist. I thought it was my cub so I walked towards the shadow but I was wrong. It was a man instead and a loud bang made me collapse and never to see my little cub ever again.

Thank you for reading this blog post. Always welcome to comment. Have a wonderful day.

What would you have written about this picture? What do you think happened to the cub?

Friday, 29 May 2020

100 word count Week 7

Kumusta everyone, This week's 100 word count is about a picture. Sometimes we have to write a 100 word count containing 5 word or a sentence and sometimes about a picture. My 100 word count story is about a girl called Serena and she lived like a maid, kind of like Cinderella. She had a dog but her step mother threw it away from their house.

Here is my 100 word count writing for this week:


There was a girl called Serena who lived like a maid just liked Cinderella.  She also has a stepmother and step brothers who treated her like she was not in their family. She did not eat with them, she did not talk to them, with just one click of a finger she knew what to do. One morning she snuck out to find her dog that her mother threw away. She followed her dog. “Wait up!” She yelled. Then he stopped as Serena looked at the ground then she looked up and saw a glorious lake. “It’s beautiful!” She whispered.





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I hope you have a great week.
Stay safe.