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Friday, 6 November 2020

100 word count 'A Dizzy Bee'

Kumusta everyone this week's 100 word count is about a picture. If you don't what '100 word count' means, then I will be able to explain it to you. Basically our teacher gives us a topic to write about and try to have a story with 100 words. The topic we relate our story about can be a picture, five words or a sentence.

My story is about a studio making a stop motion but a dizzy bee comes inside their studio. What do you think will happen next?

Here is my 100 word count writing:








Week 4

“Ready for stage 2!” yelled the director. A group of people came together and tried to shoot

a stop motion film.

Some were really, really tired and had sore eyes from the flashing camera.

Though something unexpected happened. A flying, dizzy bee started wandering

around their studio. Everyone panicked until it laid down on their studio table and

they noticed it didn’t have sting. They were all sad knowing that the bee wouldn’t

make it. They ended up making the stop motion film with the bee. It ended up as a documentary

and what adventures of a bee could’ve had.


Thank you for reading this blog post.

I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Always welcome to blog. If you ever find a dizzy what will you do?

1 comment:

  1. What a great story Venice.
    I like the use of punctuation,especially the speech marks.
    I'm not a huge fan or bees.I remember when I was little my mum pushed me behind a wheelbarrow as their was a swarm of bees flying above our house.
    Samantha has set up a small water feeder in our garden for bees to drink from.Maybe that's what this dizzy bee needs.

    I think the bee is going to get up and go home to his hive.He's going to have some honey and then go to bed.

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