My descriptive writing

Hola everyone. This week we have been working on descriptive writing. We were given a picture to describe in present tense. 

The picture is about a girl having her birthday. We weren't allowed to give them names but if I could I would name the birthday girl 'Felicia'. 

Here is my descriptive writing:

Click! The tube of the lighter lit up a small yellow fire fluttering left and right. The smell of the

gray fire smoke ruffled into my nose making me take a big sneeze. A bright yellowy orange

fire lit up the shiny colorful candles stuck through a fluffy, soft sponge cake covered with

chocolate frosting. 

Millions of sprinkles slowly drizzle off the exquisite chocolate cake. On top of the cake, kit kat,

mars bars and m&ms were scattered near the dripping candles. The lonely green gummy bear

sit in the middle of the cake

A fine lady occurs in front of the cake and makes a shiny smile exquisite as sunshine.

She flicks her gorgeous, smooth, blondy brown hair as she looks at her cake feeling delighted. 

Thank you for reading this blog post. Have a wonderful weekend.

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