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Friday, 29 May 2020

100 word count Week 7

Kumusta everyone, This week's 100 word count is about a picture. Sometimes we have to write a 100 word count containing 5 word or a sentence and sometimes about a picture. My 100 word count story is about a girl called Serena and she lived like a maid, kind of like Cinderella. She had a dog but her step mother threw it away from their house.

Here is my 100 word count writing for this week:


There was a girl called Serena who lived like a maid just liked Cinderella.  She also has a stepmother and step brothers who treated her like she was not in their family. She did not eat with them, she did not talk to them, with just one click of a finger she knew what to do. One morning she snuck out to find her dog that her mother threw away. She followed her dog. “Wait up!” She yelled. Then he stopped as Serena looked at the ground then she looked up and saw a glorious lake. “It’s beautiful!” She whispered.





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2 comments:

  1. What a beautiful story Venice.I like that you added your own ideas to the story.I hope that Cinderella and her dog have a happy ending.
    I like that you have used speech marks for the talking parts.

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    1. Thank you for commenting Mrs Cassidy. I'm glad that you liked my story. I agree, I hope that they have a happy ending. Again thank you for commenting. Have a nice weekend.

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