Here is my story:
Click! Clack! Click! I was walking in a metal hallway as my high heels were making loud
clicking noises. I stopped walking and I turned the doorknob in front of me. “You’re finally here Ms. Sierra.” My boss said.
clicking noises. I stopped walking and I turned the doorknob in front of me. “You’re finally here Ms. Sierra.” My boss said.
“Well it was hard trying to get here in England without being caught” I said.
“I have a mission for you. I want you to keep an eye on Mr. Richard.
He took one of my finest cars in the whole entire world and I want it back in my hands.
Get the car and give it to me. He will be at an event at 10.30 pm, you will disguise as
Ms. Brickle. He’ll be using the car that you will need to steal, he’s kind of a show off.
I hope you finish this job I have tasked you to do Ms. Sierra. I expect you to finish this in 5 hours.
I really need it tonight.” My boss said firmly. I walked away and got ready.
He took one of my finest cars in the whole entire world and I want it back in my hands.
Get the car and give it to me. He will be at an event at 10.30 pm, you will disguise as
Ms. Brickle. He’ll be using the car that you will need to steal, he’s kind of a show off.
I hope you finish this job I have tasked you to do Ms. Sierra. I expect you to finish this in 5 hours.
I really need it tonight.” My boss said firmly. I walked away and got ready.
I opened the car door and hopped on my car and drove to the event and disguised myself
as Ms. Brickle. I walked with confidence and got in. I quickly started searching
for Mr. Richard but he was nowhere to be found.
as Ms. Brickle. I walked with confidence and got in. I quickly started searching
for Mr. Richard but he was nowhere to be found.
Suddenly three bright lights switched on and focused on the stage.
“Welcome everyone, thanks for coming to this special event. We will now be starting
the auction.” A man said. “First up is the 67 shell-back gt-500, we will start the bid
with 15,000 dollars, do I hear 15,000, 15,000.” The man continued.
“30,000”. A lady said.
“30,000?!?!? Going once, going twice, IT'S YOURS.” The man yelled.
While the man was still talking I looked around but Mr. Richard was nowhere to be found.
“Welcome everyone, thanks for coming to this special event. We will now be starting
the auction.” A man said. “First up is the 67 shell-back gt-500, we will start the bid
with 15,000 dollars, do I hear 15,000, 15,000.” The man continued.
“30,000”. A lady said.
“30,000?!?!? Going once, going twice, IT'S YOURS.” The man yelled.
While the man was still talking I looked around but Mr. Richard was nowhere to be found.
Suddenly I heard a chatter behind the curtains at the side of the wall. I took a peek,
There was a secret room hiding behind the curtains. Behind the red thick curtains there
were 20 bodyguards guarding the Mansory Ferrari. I was so shocked my eyes were
almost as big as a wheel. Mr Richard wasn’t there but his car was. I asked myself
“Maybe it’s for the bidding.” I sneaked in the room without anybody noticing.
Then suddenly a body guard caught me and yelled, “ HEY!!!” All the bodyguards were
alarmed and stared at me. “ Ugh. They are making this more hard for me.” I whispered.
There was a secret room hiding behind the curtains. Behind the red thick curtains there
were 20 bodyguards guarding the Mansory Ferrari. I was so shocked my eyes were
almost as big as a wheel. Mr Richard wasn’t there but his car was. I asked myself
“Maybe it’s for the bidding.” I sneaked in the room without anybody noticing.
Then suddenly a body guard caught me and yelled, “ HEY!!!” All the bodyguards were
alarmed and stared at me. “ Ugh. They are making this more hard for me.” I whispered.
“Hiyah!” I yelled as I did an axe kick on one of the body guards. I fought my way through the
vehicle but there were too many, I had to retreat. I made my way out of the room. Then suddenly
a ringing sound made me shiver. It was my boss. My phone was buzzing like crazy.
I grabbed the phone and answered the call. “ Did you finish the job?” My boss asked.
I answered with, “ I’m sorry, I couldn't get it.” He was furious, he started yelling
“ YOU HAD ONE JOB. ONE. JOB and then you fail.” He was screaming so loud
I had to push the phone away from my ear. Then he said a sentence that made me freeze,
“YOU’RE FIRED.” His words echoed in my mind, It made me so shocked that I dropped
the phone. I kept thinking “ He's just joking right. This must be a joke, It has to be.”
But in my mind I knew it wasn’t a joke. I failed.
vehicle but there were too many, I had to retreat. I made my way out of the room. Then suddenly
a ringing sound made me shiver. It was my boss. My phone was buzzing like crazy.
I grabbed the phone and answered the call. “ Did you finish the job?” My boss asked.
I answered with, “ I’m sorry, I couldn't get it.” He was furious, he started yelling
“ YOU HAD ONE JOB. ONE. JOB and then you fail.” He was screaming so loud
I had to push the phone away from my ear. Then he said a sentence that made me freeze,
“YOU’RE FIRED.” His words echoed in my mind, It made me so shocked that I dropped
the phone. I kept thinking “ He's just joking right. This must be a joke, It has to be.”
But in my mind I knew it wasn’t a joke. I failed.
I sat down laying on the wall. I looked up at the sky and back down. I started crying.
“ Everything is gone now, my sister and my job.” I sobbed. I had my knees close to me
and held them tight as I cried. Then suddenly someone approached me and asked
“ Are you okay Miss?” I looked up at the man, it was Mr Richard?!?!
“ Everything is gone now, my sister and my job.” I sobbed. I had my knees close to me
and held them tight as I cried. Then suddenly someone approached me and asked
“ Are you okay Miss?” I looked up at the man, it was Mr Richard?!?!
“Umm, I-I I’m fine” I said while shivering.
“You must be cold, here take my coat.” He said. He gave me his coat and I thanked him.
He was nice after all. I guess my boss was lying.
He didn’t steal any car, it was his. After all the commotion we became friends.
This is the end of the story.
I’m glad that this story had a happy ending……. But is this really the end?
He didn’t steal any car, it was his. After all the commotion we became friends.
This is the end of the story.
I’m glad that this story had a happy ending……. But is this really the end?
The End
Thank you for reading this blog post.
Always welcome to comment.
Have a great weekend.
Stay safe.
Hello venice, I like how you named your character without notice I did know that you named her miss Sierra. I liked how you made some detail to your writing. did anyone help you?
ReplyDeleteHi Love, thank you for commenting. Yes, someone did help me, it was a teacher aide, Agnes in our room. She goes to different rooms that have Filipino students because she helps out the Filipino students. I am glad you like the way I named my characters.
DeleteHello Venice. Its Ahyan here. I like the way that you Put a great starting to the story it gave, it an interesting fell. This is a great story and I just like it cause it is very intriguing. Next time you should think about shorter story. maybe even a proper ending for the blog post. No questions. Bye
ReplyDeleteGood day Ahyan. Thanks for commenting also thanks for the advise. Though I didn't quite understand your comment. I like the way I have long stories because I am trying to make it like a book And also because I like adding a lot details I can put in this story. Again thank you for commenting.
DeleteIn a way Venice,I hope it is the end....You have written a really well thought out story.I really thought that Mr Richard was a bad person.You kept your story interesting and it made me want to read all of it.
ReplyDeleteIt just goes to show that we can't always believe what we are told.
I hope the auction place excepts card payment.I don't know of anyone who would be walking around with $30,000 in their pocket....or do I?
Hi Mrs Cassidy. Thank you for commenting. The auction does accept card payment or they will just transfer the money. You are correct, this story shows that what we are told are not always true. Again thank you for commenting. Have a great week.
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