My descriptive writing

Hola everyone. This week we have been working on descriptive writing. We were given a picture to describe in present tense. 

The picture is about a girl having her birthday. We weren't allowed to give them names but if I could I would name the birthday girl 'Felicia'. 

Here is my descriptive writing:

Click! The tube of the lighter lit up a small yellow fire fluttering left and right. The smell of the

gray fire smoke ruffled into my nose making me take a big sneeze. A bright yellowy orange

fire lit up the shiny colorful candles stuck through a fluffy, soft sponge cake covered with

chocolate frosting. 

Millions of sprinkles slowly drizzle off the exquisite chocolate cake. On top of the cake, kit kat,

mars bars and m&ms were scattered near the dripping candles. The lonely green gummy bear

sit in the middle of the cake

A fine lady occurs in front of the cake and makes a shiny smile exquisite as sunshine.

She flicks her gorgeous, smooth, blondy brown hair as she looks at her cake feeling delighted. 

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Week 2 100 word count story

Hello everybody, our task for this week's 100 word count story is adding the important five words, that we were sent, to our story. We don't usually get five words so it was little bit of a challenge for me. We usually get a a sentence or a picture to relate in our story. 

These are the five words: Concrete, Fluffy, Scooter, Red and Danced.

These word made me think about a dancer who was actually not who they think she is when out of stage.

Here is my story:

The tapping music bummed through my ears as I danced through the lavish red carpet as my bright velvet dress swinging left and right. Though after my wondrous performance the bright lights then turned off and my glorious self then disappeared. My life isn’t that spectacular when I’m not on stage. I got picked up by one of my friends on a scooter bike. I am quite poor but with my talent I am able to earn money. I am back to sleeping on concrete instead of a fluffy blanket and resting on a top quality bed. Though I know I can keep on dreaming though I know that dream will never happen.

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I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Always welcome to comment. What would you have felt if you were the girl in this story?

'But I had to see what was inside....' 100 word count Prompt story

 Hello wonderful readers. We are back at school and this is the first week after having a fantastic Holiday. For the first week we still have been doing our 100 word counts as usual. 

This week's prompt is a sentence which is, 'but I had to see what was inside'. It made me think about a person locked up and seeking to get out but finds out the horrible truth.

Here my 100 word count story:

I slowly opened my eyes and all I could see was dark black cloth covering my face. I later on felt a cold floor hitting my palm. As soon as they took off the black cover on my face the first thing I saw was a room covered with walls. I started to hear a random person yelling. It was coming from the left wall. It was really strange, I was guessing that others were also locked up in a very strange room like me. I didn’t know what was going on but I had to see what was inside.

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I hope you have a fantastic weekend.

Always welcome to comment. Do you like my story?