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Have you ever competed in a sport event?
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Hi Venice, It me Talisa if you don't know. I really like your blog post. Why did you pick hockey? Why don't you try something new. I don't feel excited for winter sports thou. Next time you could add pictures. Goodbye
ReplyDeleteHi Venice! You have written a very descriptive blog post about winter sports. It's nice that you have experienced playing hockey from the last year because Hockey is quite a hard sport to learn. Next time try adding pictures of the sport you have chosen so that it can catch other people's attention.
ReplyDeleteOther than that, keep up the great work and have a great day!
- Lyan
Good Day Lyan, Thank you for commenting and thanks for the feedback. I will try to add some pictures next time though. I don't think it's that hard to learn hockey, though it might be hard at first but when you get used to it,it will become more easier. Again, thank you for commenting. Have a wonderful week.
DeleteHello Venice, I like how you explain what sports you are playing. I hope you have a great time playing your sport and good luck playing your sport.
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Hello Alliah, Thanks for commenting. I did have a great time playing our first game in winter sports. Have you ever participated in winter sports before? Again Thank you for commenting. Have a great week.
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