What does my blog post need? I'm not sure, good thing we gathered our ideas what we could improve on our blog posts. We did a poster and some of us hasn't finished our poster.
This is what it looks like:
Always welcome to give feedbacks.
Thank you for reading my blog.😄
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 15 March 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Venice.I love the little cartoon girls you have used.They are simple and stand out.There isn't too much on your poster.It's not over cluttered.As an idea for your poster, maybe you could add a picture or a photo.Just like you did for your poster.Did you enjoy making this post?Have a great day.
ReplyDeleteGood day, Mrs Cassidy.
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. I love making this post because all my ideas were inside of it. I figured that cartoon can be realistic and cool. Thanks for the feedback.
Hi Venice.I look forward to reading more of your posts.
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