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Friday 23 February 2018

Recount Writing

WALT Write a recount

This week we are writing a recount about our weekends or
holidays. A recount is about what you  have done before. The
very hardest part of our recount was that you have  to think
about what you have done in the weekends or holidays. Miss
Scott said we needed to have an interesting start every
paragraph so the reader will not be very bored when they read
your recount. Please give me a feedback or an advice at my
recount.  
Riding a bike
Practicing my bike wasn't easy as I thought. I just fall and fall over again So I’ll just
try. My sister Is looking at me fall and start again and more falling and started again.  
All of this is happening because I always start on the grass so I started on the concrete.
Well what do you know I did it, I did I couple of loops around our car, many times.
The thing is don’t let go of your hope.

Watching my brother play
My brother got excited when he can play Ps4. my brother won at this game called
fortnite with his friend. Well I didn't get excited about that, because he will be very
entertaining and loud when he wins. While brother was playing I was bored that’s
why I always sleep.

Played PS4
I was holding the  best controller of PS4. Me and my sister was playing brawlhalla.
We got lost 2 times and win 1time. We we’re playing teams that’s why we can win.
Like always our brother wants to play something more interesting. We played Paladins
instead. It wasn't easy for me, but i just give it a shot. Well I lost I didn't saw the one
that actually killed me in the game. He/she was actually at the back .

Clean bed
I had the worst bedroom ever. I cleaned out my dirty clothes  from the floor, and to
the  basket and started to fix my clean clothes. My clean clothes is also messy so i
started to fold it properly. The Pillows and my teddy’s was on the floor so I put them
where they were supposed to be.  My sister helped me folding my blanket  and We
finished cleaning up.

Played tab
I holded the awesome tab in my hand. Me and my sister was playing an app called
Minecraft. We can change the skin character and plan our world. We did a lot of
building and I maked A secret hiding place. We didn't had a chance to do the roof
because it was always raining in the app so I have to change the weather over and
over again, so I decided to have a rest and slept (I didn't sleep at the app).

Summary
My recount is great  because I tried riding  biking without complaining anything.
The minecraft are good to play with if it wasn't raining. My best part about my
recount is riding my bike. Thank you for reading my recount writing.